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Post by ••NARLA•• on Jul 7, 2011 15:03:38 GMT -5
A b b e y I slipped out down to the park,I carried my guitar on my back.Id come here yesterday,no one would be at the park at the moment,maybe mase.I quite liked him.I even thought he was kinda cute.Anyway,i need to get the words to that melody.I want to carry on in my dream career. IN the warm,early morning sunshine,I sat down on the swinging bench.I undid the guitar case and held my guitar.I strummed the first few chords of the song.I thought for a second. "I know you."I said out loud the words that i wanted to be the first line.Maybe the ine should be longer.Maybe"I know you love"Yeah,it sounded nice. I smiled and played the chords and added the words,i got a bit carried away and sang alot of lines,as they just cam to me.I sung it again: * I know you love, I know you care, I know you fear And i know you cry, I know you worry, I know you pry And i know because.....* I stopped,not being able to think of words.I said it then strummed the chords of the last lines. And i know because i watch you from above. And i stare. And i know its all because of me!*
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Post by Rubyrocks loves Her Pony on Jul 7, 2011 15:07:04 GMT -5
Katie
I walked into the park and heard an amazing voice singing i ran to where it was coming form and lent against a tree watching this girl sing when i got there
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Post by ••NARLA•• on Jul 7, 2011 15:11:20 GMT -5
I heard footsteps.It must be mase,I ignored it and played the whole song.
* I know you love, I know you care,
I know you fear And i know you cry,
I know you worry, I know you pry
And i know because i watch you from above. And i stare. And i know its all because of me!*
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Post by Rubyrocks loves Her Pony on Jul 7, 2011 15:13:01 GMT -5
I kept listening to the girl,i thought she was amazing
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Post by ••NARLA•• on Jul 7, 2011 15:18:15 GMT -5
I saw the feet of the girl.She hadnt realised.But i could see her.She was spying on me.I stopped playing and put doan my guitar.I didntlike being interupted.Unless by mase."Excuse me!Do you mind"I said to the girl.
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Post by Rubyrocks loves Her Pony on Jul 7, 2011 15:20:22 GMT -5
"Oh sorry,i was only listening"I said upset because she shouted at me for doing nothing
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Post by ••NARLA•• on Jul 7, 2011 15:24:34 GMT -5
"Yeah.You couldve asked.I would of let you,you know.Its rude to eavesdrop"Abbey puleld up her guitar again."Do you wan t to come closer to listen."
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Post by Rubyrocks loves Her Pony on Jul 7, 2011 15:25:56 GMT -5
"Umm... no thank i'll just leave if i'm bothering you"I said turning round and walking of
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Post by ••NARLA•• on Jul 7, 2011 15:28:19 GMT -5
Abbey shook her head."Look.If you like my music.Listen to me.I need to practice infront of an audience."
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Post by Rubyrocks loves Her Pony on Jul 7, 2011 15:29:58 GMT -5
"It's ok you don't want me here,you were obviously expecting someone else by te way you spoke to me" I said turning round and then walking of again
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Post by ••NARLA•• on Jul 8, 2011 2:15:44 GMT -5
Abbey
I sighed.I was trying to be nice."I was just wonderuing if you would like to help me write my next somg?"I offered.
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Post by Rubyrocks loves Her Pony on Jul 8, 2011 2:39:27 GMT -5
"I'd love to,i love writing songs but i can never sing them so i could write and you could sing if you liked the liyrcs"I said smiling
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Post by ••NARLA•• on Jul 8, 2011 2:42:23 GMT -5
"Yeah.OK.WEll,my big dream is to be a singer/so gwriter.So i'll write most the somgs.But you can be my assistant.OK?"Abbey smiled.She moved up on the bench to the girl could sit."My namez abbey.Whats yours?You start wigh some words of a song,or a title that you like perhaps"
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Post by Rubyrocks loves Her Pony on Jul 8, 2011 2:45:24 GMT -5
"Umm.... cool,my names Katie"I said sitting down "What about the tittle Being In Paridise"I said smiling
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Post by ••NARLA•• on Jul 8, 2011 2:47:30 GMT -5
"Hi katie.I like that a little bit.Say somethign that could be the first line?"
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Post by Rubyrocks loves Her Pony on Jul 8, 2011 2:49:25 GMT -5
"Hi abz,can i call you abz?,maybe Im sitting in paridise"I said smiling
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Post by ••NARLA•• on Jul 8, 2011 2:51:31 GMT -5
"Course ya can"I smiled."No,thats not such a great first luine.That should be a line in the chorus"
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Post by Rubyrocks loves Her Pony on Jul 8, 2011 2:55:11 GMT -5
"Yeah that's a good idea,you think of the first line"I said smiling
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Post by ••NARLA•• on Jul 8, 2011 2:58:37 GMT -5
"Urmm.."Abbey strummed a few chords and sang
*Grab my bag and my shoes, and i'll head for the summer blues.*
"first two lines.Whattta ya think?"
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Post by Rubyrocks loves Her Pony on Jul 8, 2011 3:00:24 GMT -5
"Umm... yeah there ok"I saids miling
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Post by ••NARLA•• on Jul 8, 2011 3:04:30 GMT -5
"Some more then.If mine arent good.What do u think for the first line"
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Post by Rubyrocks loves Her Pony on Jul 8, 2011 3:07:11 GMT -5
"I didn't say there wern't good they're fine for a second line maybe Strolling along the street,Summer shopping is so sweet"I said smiling
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Post by ••NARLA•• on Jul 8, 2011 3:09:23 GMT -5
"Those two were 1 qnd 2 lines.THis will be for 3rd and 4th lines.What about you change it a bit like thi"
*Strollling to the beat, Summer is so sweet.*
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Post by Rubyrocks loves Her Pony on Jul 8, 2011 9:35:20 GMT -5
"Umm... yeah that's good"I said smiling
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Post by ••NARLA•• on Jul 8, 2011 12:19:25 GMT -5
"ok. What can we have next. Shall we have the chorus now"
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Post by Rubyrocks loves Her Pony on Jul 8, 2011 14:11:51 GMT -5
"Yeah we should go to the chorous"I said smiling
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Post by ••NARLA•• on Jul 8, 2011 14:16:07 GMT -5
"So,we should have the line you metioned earlier as the strt of the chorus.What about this as the chorus"
*Being in paridise, Its so nice. Before i think twice, Im staying in paridise.*
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Post by Rubyrocks loves Her Pony on Jul 8, 2011 14:17:06 GMT -5
"Yeah that really works lets do that"I said smiling
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Post by ••NARLA•• on Jul 8, 2011 14:24:04 GMT -5
"OK.You think of the next four lines for the next verse"Abz smiled at the girl.
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Post by Rubyrocks loves Her Pony on Jul 8, 2011 14:45:56 GMT -5
"Umm..."I said sitting there for a while "What about, oh i don't know help me"I said smiling
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