hey read my outline and see if you like it

[KM loves MUSIC and PEANUT!!!!]

Taylor’s life is great she as a loving boyfriend and she was offered a job as a fashion designer and life seems to be going great until strange events start surrounding her when her boyfriend is brutally murdered, she starts seeing things that seem to be a man watching her but when she calls the cops they tell her she probably just saw a homeless man looking for a place to sleep for the night, but when she comes home to find her apartment broken into and trashed she calls the copes again they come over to find the place in perfect condition they ask her if see wasn’t just spoked by something and thought she saw it that way she tries to tell she wasn’t seeing things and they tell her no more crack calls she is even more scared when she calls her best friend Linda she acted like they haven’t been friends for a long time she tries to talk to her but she hangs up the phone before Taylor can say anything to her and then Linda turns up dead and she is the only suspect for her boyfriend and Linda’s
murders, but when she wakes up from having strange dreams about sceans she doesn’t remember, a chine of events unravel around her and will the truth of who killed her friends put her at ease or will it drive her crazy or is she there already.


this is a outline to a book I was gonna write but never did tell me what ya of my outlline and I might try to write it.

[Super <3]

LOVE IT!!!! WRITE IT!!!

[KM loves MUSIC and PEANUT!!!!]

awesome will try too!!!

[Super <3]

Yay!!! Post it up when you are done!! ^^ Not rushing you though!

[KM loves MUSIC and PEANUT!!!!]

kkk wil start the first page and see how that goes!!

[KM loves MUSIC and PEANUT!!!!]

here is the first page, I just now finshed it. the next page is at the party.

Taylor was just about jumping up and down with excitement at the news, she quickly
got out her cell and found Linda’s number, “Hello?” Linda said, “Hi, Linda its Taylor
you’ll guess what just happened!” she with great happiness, “well I may never hear it
either if you keep yelling like that” she said and they both laughed, “whatever I got the
job” she said almost yelling again, “no way! Are you serious! You can’t be serious”
she replied, “yeah I am can you believe it!” she said “no I can’t, so where we going
tonight to celebrate,” she said, “huh how bout the club?” she asked “yeah that will be
perfect, is Danny gonna be there?” Linda asks “of course why wouldn’t he be?!” she
answers, “OK just thought I’d ask just in case he was gonna be working tonight or
something,” she said and Taylor rolled her eyes her friend could be such a dittz some
times, “well yeah he’ll be there, now can you go to the club and everything for
tonight?” she asked “yeah not problem, so what time should we tell people to shwo
up?” she asked “how does 8:30 sound to you?” “Yeah that sounds good” “OK well
bye see you later” she said hanging up the phone and making a text list for the
invites, ‘The Club Tonight 8:30 PM, Having Big Party’ she wrote into the text box and
sent the text, and she got about twenty texts back
‘Wouldn’t miss it!!!’
‘I’m in’
‘see ya tonight’
‘Can’t wait’
and the list just went on and on, then all the sudden the phone rang and she
answered it, it was a number she didn’t know, “hello” no one answered “hello is
someone there?” she said and then she heard the click saying the phone had been
hung up, “um must of been a wrong number” she said to herself, and then she got a
text ‘see ya at the party tonight ;(‘ was the message she got and it was from a number
shed never seen before, and it sent shivers down her spine.

[Super <3]

Creepy... but AMAZING

[KM loves MUSIC and PEANUT!!!!]

thanks!!!!!

[fizzy]

It's totally awesome!





Hey!
Shadow, music and I are trying to get saddle up into a new craze and we'd love it, honestly, if you could help!


Love the musicluva789 club

[shadow loves musicluva789]

I love it. Two things though

1. Make sure another author isnt also writing a book along those lines and 2. try to fix the she said "insert dialouge here" then she said "insert dialouge here" if that makes sense. Is this your first book because its really good!

[KM loves MUSIC and PEANUT!!!!]

haha thanks guys, and Shadow yeah kinda I have like a zillion outlined books but I always get to like chapter 5 or so and get stuck, I also a book about a wild horse that I never finished, but writing is in my blood, my grandma was a writer wrote a entire serise, and my mom writes scipts.

[fizzy]

Ur good enough.

[shadow loves musicluva789]

Ya you obvisouly have talent in writing

[musicluva789 LOVES KM!!!]

I love it! I write too, I have an entire library of stories I've been riding since I was four to now at my godmother's house, and I still write them!

[fizzy]

haha lol x
ur an awesome auther. XD could you review my first chapter of my new book when I post it on my thread?


LOVE FiZzY xxx