Post by destery on Dec 23, 2010 23:54:10 GMT -5
Hey guys! Here is a new horse story that I'm working on.
Outline: Jane and her two friends decide to go on a trail ride together.
In the middle of winter.
In the freezing cold.
Her friend, Niki, decides to go up one of the hills that leads to a frozen lake. Unwillingly, Jane, Niki, and Adam agree to go with her. But, on the way down the hill that leads to the lake, Niki and her new horse, Prince, slip and fall onto the lake. Jane and her horse, Cowboy, fall down too. The lake breaks, making them all fall into the lake. Surrounded by ice and freezing cold water, Jane tries her best to save her and Cowboy. A few days later, Jane wakes up in the hospital. She learns that Nike and Prince died right when they entered the water. But, Cowboy escaped the water, and can't be found. Now, Jane wants to look for Cowboy. But it might become a struggle, when she starts to doubt that Cowboy is able to survive the long, cold winter. Will Jane saves Cowboy? Or will Cowboy have to save Jane?
Leave a reply telling me if I should write the story or not!
Outline: Jane and her two friends decide to go on a trail ride together.
In the middle of winter.
In the freezing cold.
Her friend, Niki, decides to go up one of the hills that leads to a frozen lake. Unwillingly, Jane, Niki, and Adam agree to go with her. But, on the way down the hill that leads to the lake, Niki and her new horse, Prince, slip and fall onto the lake. Jane and her horse, Cowboy, fall down too. The lake breaks, making them all fall into the lake. Surrounded by ice and freezing cold water, Jane tries her best to save her and Cowboy. A few days later, Jane wakes up in the hospital. She learns that Nike and Prince died right when they entered the water. But, Cowboy escaped the water, and can't be found. Now, Jane wants to look for Cowboy. But it might become a struggle, when she starts to doubt that Cowboy is able to survive the long, cold winter. Will Jane saves Cowboy? Or will Cowboy have to save Jane?
Leave a reply telling me if I should write the story or not!
I would read it!!!
