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Post by fizzy on Dec 25, 2010 15:32:13 GMT -5
BLURBS BLURBMy name is Destiny Childe. I was very young when I got the life-changing bracelet. I was only seven and I thought it was just your average, pretty bracelet back then but now I know different. Now I know that it’s not just a pretty, little bracelet. Now I know that it’s my destiny – and it’s out to get me wherever it can. BLURB (2)Destiny Childe was only seven when she got a cute bracelet with little charms on it – a sheep, a gingerbread man, a star, an Indian elephant, a pram and a little bead that said HOPE. She thought it was the best Christmas present ever back then… Hey guys! I’m going to be writing a new series of books about a charm bracelet that carries a girl’s destiny. I’ve written two completely different blurbs but I’ve read them over and over, quite a few times each actually, and I can’t decide which one’s better. That’s where you come in! I really want you to choose which blurb is better, and also if you would rush to the book shop next time you passed it and buy it. I’m not going to get it published but I want my English teacher to see that I am actually a decent writer even though the work I do at school is pretty useless. (I honestly do try though!) Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year! Love Fizzy xxx P.S. Haha lol, It’s taken me a full half hour to write and perfect this post xxx
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Post by KM loves MUSIC and PEANUT!!!! on Dec 25, 2010 15:37:00 GMT -5
haha that's good Fizzy, I like them both, but I would say I do like Blurb 1 best hope I helped a little.
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Post by fizzy on Dec 25, 2010 15:39:22 GMT -5
Yeah, thanks. I'll see what others say before I use it though x I might use it anyway cuz it's got a nice last sentence that leaves the reader "needing" to read the book lol xxx
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Post by KM loves MUSIC and PEANUT!!!! on Dec 26, 2010 0:55:33 GMT -5
hehe that's why I liked the first one it had made me want to see what happens.
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Post by destery on Dec 26, 2010 0:58:20 GMT -5
Blurp 1 fo sho!!
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Post by fizzy on Dec 26, 2010 3:39:48 GMT -5
k thanks x I'll use blurb 1.
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Post by shadow loves musicluva789 on Dec 30, 2010 20:12:29 GMT -5
Ah-mazing.... blurb one all the way! I will buy it! i was going to use blurb site as soon as i wrote a book but my butt is to lazy so far so...
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Post by fizzy on Dec 31, 2010 2:28:31 GMT -5
hehehe lol XD
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